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Dead, Beaten, Stained, And Torn
Contributed by
Ryleen
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Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 12:04:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What you've said and What you've done
won't build me up just watch me fall
You listen to me I'll listen to you
Watch my heart tear itself to pieces inside out
What you've done to hurt me
What you said to burn me
Did nothing but bring yourself to ruin
The way you felt, was it fake?
Will I ever learn to trust again?
There's nothing to lose but everything to gain
You still run to me in times of hurt
But will I watch you rise then watch you burn?
The closest to the burning embers will be my heart
Dead, Beaten, and Torn.
Copyright ©
Ryleen
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2006-01-29 00:04:30]
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Re: Dead, Beaten, Stained, And Torn
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:44:58 AM AEST
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| Intense emotion in this write. Good job. |
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Re: Dead, Beaten, Stained, And Torn
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 07:40:18 AM AEST
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It was the title the drew me in...
but If this has happened to you...
...then please know that
my thoughts, prayers and love are with you.. always..
...and with the Greatest Confidence-
Billy
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Re: Dead, Beaten, Stained, And Torn
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by MG_Akela22090 on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 12:54:22 PM AEST
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| Powerful. |
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