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tears
Contributed by
the_pied_piper
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Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 11:23:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Tears flowing down the sides of my face
as i taste the salty sweet droplets that have
landed upon my soft pink lips
looking into the mirror i ponder
why have i let myself get this way?
what does it matter anyway?
starring in the mirror poking
my tear staind face
pondering how i got this way
why i let them do this to me
why i let it bother me
as these tears pour down my soft sad face
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2006-01-28 23:23:08]
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Re: tears
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 01:40:27 AM AEST
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| I did read so....I shall comment. It was a sad write. Could definitely feel your sadness. You just seemed repetitive with some of your words..mirror, face ponder/pondering...maybe that was your intention. Peace, Laura |
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Re: tears
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by EmSal on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 12:05:25 AM AEST
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| Yeah even if you convince yourself that it shouldn't bother you, it still does!!!! Dammit!!!! Good write, I have been there. |
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