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I Just Can't
Contributed by
lil_pup91
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Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 08:39:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm ripped in half
I can't do this anymore
There's just too much
And no time
I'm so tired
I just want to sleep
There's too much to do
Too much to handle
And no one cares
I want time to freeze
I want everything to go away
I want someone to help
But no one will
I know what I'm doing wrong
What can I do right
When will someone help
When will there be time
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lil_pup91
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2006-01-28 20:39:10]
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Re: I Just Can't
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 08:47:25 PM AEST
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| You have expressed yourself here very well. Wonderful write. I can relate. Hang in there. When you get down, put that pen or pencil to paper, I find it very therapeutic. Keep sharing. Peace, Laura |
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Re: I Just Can't
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:19:12 AM AEST
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| Great write. I could really sense your frustration. We've all been there. Keep writing! |
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Re: I Just Can't
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by catz77 on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 08:14:40 PM AEST
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i find myself here a lot
but i found the answer to everything
which always picks me up
good write
catz |
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