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Amaranthine
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 06:05:24 PM in AEST
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( this blended so well ...I have trouble recalling who wrote what )
Thank you Rocksie .... it took a month ... but it was worth it.
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2006-01-28 18:05:24]
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Re: Amaranthine
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 08:03:41 PM AEST
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| ty I liked it rl |
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Re: Amaranthine
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 10:13:50 PM AEST
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Awesome write...
Great presentation too!!
Jenni
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Re: Amaranthine
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 12:22:46 AM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Amaranthine
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by Spike on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 04:51:03 AM AEST
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Wheew!! Is it hot in here, or is it just...the poem?
Unfading indeed. The best collaborative poem I've ever,ever read on this site, and a terrific emotional piece. If it took me 6 months to write this, I would feel blessed by the muse.
In the words of iron Mike Tyson, Naz and B, I take my head off to you.
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Re: Amaranthine
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 03:24:28 PM AEST
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::::licks tip of finger:::::
::::::holds it in the air:::::
TSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!
That sizzled!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So find who wrote it and give them credit dangnammit!!!
Nazzy?? Is that your hunky body by any chance? :P
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Amaranthine
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 06:05:09 PM AEST
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Snazzy, this turned out so much better than I had envisioned when
I threw those two lines out atcha. Amazed, am I, always, at your
incredible talent. And we both know, you deserve most of the
credit for this. I adore what you did with it!!
*squeezies*
~R |
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Re: Amaranthine
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by Willofree on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 12:12:01 PM AEST
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Those few lines you through across the internet sure connected beautifully. This is a fantastic write. A love poem t hat transcends a purely physical, even emotional, relationship. It, I think, reaches a spiritual level.
Well done Nazzy and Breezy, a great collaborative effort.
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Re: Amaranthine
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 09:46:10 AM AEST
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I certainly could not see the joins in this beautifully romantic poem.It has an ephemeral feel for me,let's take this moment because we know it will never be experienced again.Impressive double act,
Den |
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Re: Amaranthine
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 07:16:21 PM AEST
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Beautifully penned this brought a tear to my
eye. I'm unsure what to say it was just all
around great.
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