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Would You
Contributed by
rationality
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Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 03:20:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Would you believe me...
if I told you that it wasn't me?
if I said I was the one?
if I said I could not see?
Would you hear me...
if I was talking to you?
if I screamed a million screams?
if I told you I was dying?
Would you tell me...
that it will all be ok when it won't?
that you were coming to me?
that it was all my fault?
Would you hold me...
as I cried out my heart?
as I did not want to live?
as I wasted away to nothingness?
Would you hurt me...
Oh... wait... you already did...
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Re: Would You
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by brittaney on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 03:25:15 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem, it means a lot to me right now. |
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Re: Would You
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by Poetic_Influence on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 07:19:07 PM AEST
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Re: Would You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:50:24 PM AEST
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| Aw....Such a sad write. But I can definately relate. Wonderful work. Thank you for sharing, and please keep writing! I'll keep reading... |
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Re: Would You
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 11:37:14 PM AEST
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Only if ya waz talkin to me.
Luv your sense of humor as u r must be in pain, releif or somethin?.
Who eva they r jus hands these to them and if it don't move um, move on.
Your writing is like a bolt lightening in it's power-n-beauty.
huggs,emy |
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