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Hostage
Contributed by
felicitous
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Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 08:32:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Perhaps I annihilated tranquility,
but I delight in the variety and the intricacy.
Perfect me, it chants,
restore my authority to entrance.
You fool, hope is juvenile!
I'm given no choice.
I raise my hands and still my voice.
I sense creativity release from my ramble.
It scoffs at my attempt to harnass the intangible.
Yes, I surrender.
Copyright ©
felicitous
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2006-01-28 08:32:43]
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Re: Hostage
(User Rating: 1 )
by TheSpiritx on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 10:09:55 PM AEST
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Heh, I chuckled at the personification of your creativity - it was a well-crafted sentence.
Pretty good little poem, felicitous. A great topic of concern.
I am interested in seeing more. :)
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Re: Hostage
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by Lilly-Quill on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 11:12:12 AM AEST
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Profoundly intriguing, to say the least. Uniquely creative, and masterful, to say the most. Well done.
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