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This is another one of my poem stars.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:36:42 PM in AEST
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I love the stars and I dont like bars.
I once lived in a boxcar and a car.
I dont like cigars and crossbars I once had to use a crowbar on my car.
The drawers in my house had a collect of cars.
I once wanted a flatcar and a guitar and a jaguas , that I could put into a jar.
I once wanted to travel to mars and to see the stars .
The streets were feel with sidecars and you heard the sound of radars all around you.
And there was this man who was on the streets who had a scar from falling onto the tar road.
But at least our jaguas doesn't have stars are radars on it...
But from all of this all I ever wanted to do is see the stars and mars.
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Re: This is another one of my poem stars.
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:42:56 PM AEST
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intersting write
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Re: This is another one of my poem stars.
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:44:29 PM AEST
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What does it all mean? I feel like I am missing something. To me it is a lot of words that just rhyme. Are you being silly or serious?
"I once lived in a boxcar and a car" ??
"I don't like cigars and crossbars I once had to use a crowbar on my car"
Like Dr.Suess sort of. Interesting. Peace, Laura |
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Re: This is another one of my poem stars.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 01:23:45 AM AEST
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| Yes, and sometimes we just have to get through all those other things, in order to get to where we truly want to be. Another wisdom write here, thank you.... love it... raquelLeah |
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Re: This is another one of my poem stars.
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 03:20:14 PM AEST
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Nice little bit of fluff this :-) Lite and airy. But what are jaguas? LOL Just curious..:-)
Whisper
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