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Helpless
Contributed by
dvsnme816
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Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 05:45:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sometimes i feel like a lightning bug trapped in a mason jar,
I can't see a way out till the stained glass in front of my eyes breaks apart,
and in those stains lies my blood sweat and tears trynna get out of this slum,
I'm clawin and scrapin to continue and be able to look up,
won't be able to fly cause someone is always keeping me down,
I'm barely alive and I can hardly breathe out,
I'm feelin lonely and my future is what seems to be what a slave is,
if i escape i'll never be seen for the light i had to awaken...
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2006-01-27 05:45:01]
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Re: Helpless
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:59:56 PM AEST
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| Very impressive write. I could almost hear you screaming out these words. Keep expressing yourself. Excellent job. Peace to you, Laua |
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Re: Helpless
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 10:00:15 PM AEST
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| Very impressive write. I could almost hear you screaming out these words. Keep expressing yourself. Excellent job. Peace to you, Laura |
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