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Begging Love
Contributed by
chulysnacky
on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 04:58:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You have me so hypnotized
All I can do is fantasize
It is like a dream come true
Baby I belong to you
You are all I see
Baby please come back to me
Never did I understand
That you were such a handsome man
Together we walk hand in hand
It is almost as if it were our plan
To be together
In any kind of weather
For "You" I will sacrifiice
It's no problem to pay the price
For love has no end
And you is where i began
For you i cannot stop crying
I feel like i am just dying
Its all in the air
I feel like I can't bare
the truth it lies in us
although we have no trust
i know its not lust
but baby its a must
i cannot be without you
honey can't you see my love is true
and if you cannot see
my dear i will find my way to thee
your face is everywhere
from top to bottom i stare
moreover, yes it has me feeling scared
i have never felt this way
nevertheless, i guess it is the price i have to pay
yes, it is true love
you are the one that i think of
day in and day out
it makes me want to shout
i live my life in misery
pretty much since the day that you dissed me
why can't you see our love was meant to be?
if you turn the other way
i will feel like you have gone astray
baby all i have to say is...
please don't look the other way, and
please do not take your love away
i need you and i hope you need me
cause without you i feel like i just cannot see.
and if you're turning away is true
than honey, i will be feeling sad and blue.
all i want is to be next to you
and i thought you did too.
Copyright ©
chulysnacky
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2006-01-26 16:58:43]
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Re: Begging Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 03:16:38 PM AEST
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| Such a sad write...I could really feel your emotion in this. |
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Re: Begging Love
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 11:46:40 PM AEST
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Awesomely written even in it's sadness.
great writing. I can relate.
Huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Begging Love
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by OzChick on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 10:06:10 AM AEST
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| Your love and your hurt are so strong in this poem. The rhyming sometimes seemed a little forced but you expressed your feelings clearly and that is what poetry is about, expressing our true selves. Well done. |
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