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A Timely Snowstorm
Contributed by
darien
on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 03:52:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Dark clouds beckon to me
With cold tears splashing night
But I dream as lost lovers
And see no other sight
Not violence at my window
Only visions of a girl
Misunderstood by snowflakes
That pass over my world
To think that love would fall
Upon me like this storm
Though outside it is frozen
Inside my chest it's warm
With pulse I'd gladly give
To gaze into blue eyes
Like lightning cast in winter
Dancing through the skies
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2006-01-26 15:52:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Timely Snowstorm
(User Rating: 1 ) by felicitous on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 06:11:15 AM AEST (User
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I appreciate the depth behind the simple wording. And your rhythmn is great. I really like this! |
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