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Don't Cry For Me
Contributed by
Vermilion
on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 09:55:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A hunger filled plea
I walk with the dead
As time sprints by
She takes me, instead
A wonder of grace
Tainted and lay
Sickle sweet remorse
Of corpse still today
Don’t cry for me
I have cried enough
To walk with my sweet
In Hell with the rough
A silent scream
Torture of the mind
And somewhere in here
Is truth not to find
But lay your head
And sleep for the now
Stop asking why
And start asking how
Did She forsake us?
Did She let me go?
Dwell not on the answers
But of what you know
For somewhere deep
Six foot under ground
Is the morbid truth
Waiting to be found
So don’t take my hand
Don’t follow me low
One magpie a sorrow
That sways to and fro
The wind in my eyes
The taste on my tongue
The song of bitter sweetness
That we have once sung…
But the song has ended
Last chords have died out
Filled in with silence
With darkness and doubt…
Don’t cry for me.
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Vermilion
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2006-01-26 09:55:48]
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Re: Don't Cry For Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 10:06:42 AM AEST
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| excellent poem, my best guess its about the frailty of women and the void they leave behind. Loved the imagery and bleakness |
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Re: Don't Cry For Me
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by JordonsBaby17 on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 10:55:06 AM AEST
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| nice job. |
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Re: Don't Cry For Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 04:16:30 PM AEST
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| great poem! |
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Re: Don't Cry For Me
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by MG_Akela22090 on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 08:48:05 PM AEST
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| Very dramatic. Very Good. |
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Re: Don't Cry For Me
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by Solo on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:06:02 PM AEST
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| U did amazing job with this poem. |
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