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i wanna die alone
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
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Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 03:30:44 AM in AEST
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I look for a razor
Look no one wants to save her
I drag it across my wrist
Open the bottle, and tightly clench my fist
I take all the pills
And feel completely ill
I laid on the ground
And died without a single sound
No one knew, no one came
Im not saying its a shame
I wanted to die alone
No one would have known
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Re: i wanna die alone
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by bernard2 on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 12:13:03 PM AEST
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| Learn to live before its too late. I am 76 and life is still sweet. Yes I have had my share of lifes downs but I have never given up. I sincerly hope you look back on this poem of yours and have one day a good laugh. Peace from bernard2 |
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Re: i wanna die alone
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 01:00:41 AM AEST
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no you don't wanna die i forbid it.you hear me.
I love you more then anything in the world so don't ever say that.anyways good write.
love and hugs
mom |
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Re: i wanna die alone
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 04:02:28 PM AEST
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Please that is so final. Think time will heal and love is near. Ask your Mom, Dad or brother,sis or Best friend They will lisen. Try
Peace
Whisper |
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Re: i wanna die alone
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by aplsdka on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:58:22 PM AEST
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| No you dont. Good poem, by the way |
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