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Puddle of Tears
Contributed by
radstraightedge
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Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 07:14:14 PM in AEST
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This puddle seems to be growing so deep as it fills itself with these tears that I hastily weep. With every tear that hits the ground, a piece of my heart dies and I watch it slowly drown. This heart that once used to beat so steady, is now getting weak and is starting to feel heavy. My eyes are starting to close and my breath is getting short. I am wishing right now that this plan I could abort. This isn't the way it was supposed to end, but now my body is past the point of ever being able to mend.
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Re: Puddle of Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 08:17:10 PM AEST
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| Good poem. |
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Re: Puddle of Tears
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 09:51:36 PM AEST
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| Excellent hard-hitting piece. Sadly beautiful. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Puddle of Tears
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by Packatack on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 07:37:09 AM AEST
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In God's word it says that those who shed tears will be lifted up...God knows everything thats happening....let Him know what u go thru...talk to Him like u talk with your friends...
Good poem and thanks for sharing |
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