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The Grass is Always Greener?
Contributed by
dance_dance
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Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 06:51:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I think he has the grass is always greener syndrome,
I’m a good thing- I know I’m a good thing
I’m green.
Greener then anything he’s ever had
He just can’t see it, he’s blind-
Color blind.
He wouldn’t know green if it hit him in his face
Smack!
In his face, but he can’t see the green
Staining his lips,
Dripping down his chest,
Showering his shoulders, his back
Tainting his ears.
But he didn’t see me
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Re: The Grass is Always Greener?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 08:38:27 PM AEST
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| A good poem. I liked it. I understand how you feel, may people have failed to see how much I care for them. Good poem. |
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Re: The Grass is Always Greener?
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 01:07:31 AM AEST
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Unique way of looking at it. Men are blind as bats most of the time. They will leave a lush pasture for a dried up patch of weeds and wonder why they are still hungry. You have to understand that men were just a rough draft and then God made women, lol. I like this poem.
Rita |
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Re: The Grass is Always Greener?
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by Winterland on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 10:52:35 AM AEST
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Good visuals. Well done.
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Re: The Grass is Always Greener?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 07:14:58 PM AEST
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Its because us tall green grass blades are so high and wonderfully grown, that they can't see the grass for the lawnmower lol.. hope they don't trip over the tops of the green grass blades. and by the way, lol Rita, you got that right.. and then along came woman lol. raquelLeah
Ok, your poem helped me, I am feeling better.. keep writing.. so we can all read.. I like that smack.. lol, dang it anyway.. guys out there, why can't you open up your eyes, get with the program... whereever you go, you take your baggage with you, so, may as well keep your bags home.. lol. |
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