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All thanks to you
Contributed by
poetic_influence
on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 02:48:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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All thanks to you
I now no longer feel free
Nothing to hold on to
And Nothing to be
Faded pictures In my hand
Of a girl unbroken
And no one will ever understand
Bucause I now am a girl left unspoken
They say its depression
But thats because they dont know
The feeling of my hearts regression
Refusing to grow
All thanks to you
I can never love again
Because I will never believe in true
I just dont think I can
You have defined me
As a girl who is weak
Weak for your games
So weak...That I cannot speak
So I write
But no one reads....
I am broken
And no glue can fix that
No words soft spoken
Can replace the life I once had
This body...so battered and bruised
Once was a work of art
But now it feels so used
So torn apart
These eyes
So blue and bright
Now see lies
And resemble the shade of the night
All thanks to you
I am defeated
I could whipe away my tears
But they will just be repeated
So instead my tears form oceans
And I am left without a rescue
An electric chair of emotions
And I....
Would love to thank you....
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2006-01-25 14:48:03]
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Re: All thanks to you
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by temper on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 03:10:53 PM AEST
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| dis poem is iight u juss need a lot of work don't talk about no mo of my poems iight cuz mine ain't racist u juss don't undastand my poems are above yo level |
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Re: All thanks to you
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 03:17:46 PM AEST
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So heart felt and sad. Im so sorry that your having these troubles. DOnt let a guy take that away from you, your strong, show the world!
Your style and rhyme are done nicely
Michelle
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Re: All thanks to you
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 04:24:37 PM AEST
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a very lovely wrie and sad at that ty for posting it
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Re: All thanks to you
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by Winterland on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 05:04:14 PM AEST
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| Great job! |
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Re: All thanks to you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 06:39:33 PM AEST
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| Very deep and moving poem, good luck to you....mike |
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