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human delight
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 02:45:03 PM in AEST
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a star just deadlight a image of the past
its faded twinkle its lonely forgotten death
or a view into heaven like a pin hole in paper
a force beyond blind to our sinful eyes
feeling so small with thoughts like this
but small doesnt mean alone
a taste bland in my mouth
swallowed morals to many times
just a course of human delight
the sea called to me last night
her cold imbrace longing for my touch
its mysteries to solve and magic to behold
but dreams are only dreams and they fade
but curiosity never dies it only sleeps
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2006-01-25 14:45:03]
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Re: human delight
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 03:19:08 PM AEST
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beautiful images. ANother flowing intersting write, nicely done Id give you ten stars on this one if the rating went that high.
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Re: human delight
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 03:23:23 PM AEST
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Very nice, Good flow and choice of words to bring the reader in.
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Re: human delight
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 02:37:11 PM AEST
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| I absolutely loved the imagery in this poem, keep up the good work! |
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