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You Abandoned me
Contributed by
POOBEAR
on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Hey, are you a man or a mormon?
You said you loved me like a daughter,
as much as one of your own.
Then you moved to the so called promised
land, and now I no longer exist.
You are such a hypocrite to look down
on me.
Maybe you are angry and bitter because
you were gulllible enough to get sucked
into a cult.
Don't you find it a little strange that
the story has changed so many times
that it can't possibly be true.
You are no saint, no far from it.
You are arrogant enough to think
that the only way for a woman to
get into heaven is for you to pull her
through?
You are so blind , and I suggest
if your daughters are misssing,
you should look into the possibility
of incest.
Copyright ©
POOBEAR
... [
2003-01-27 05:20:00]
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Re: You Abandoned me
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:30:43 PM AEST
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| Pooh,This was so intense,I know theres anger there in this I can see that in your words!Good write! Christina |
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Re: You Abandoned me
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by norticus on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 06:14:43 PM AEST
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This is stinky. Spelling could use work as could the content. I love poetry especially when the authors take the time to make it well.
2 on the Nortiscale.
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