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The Corrupt Plague
Contributed by
wis_poet
on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:21:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
political
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The hate burns inside
Burns and Burns
Burns hotter then the flames upon the sun
It burns so much it begins to ache in my heart
The cause for thsi pain inside
Is the pain and lies around our nation
The pains and lies the government does
The neglect and recklessness of the government
Their lies and hurt spreads like a plague
Sure some aren't as bad as others
But a corrupt system always lives on
We the people are the cure for this disease
We can put a stop to the spread
We can fix their wrongs
We can come together and raise the hopes of those who have lost it
We are.......The People!.........The Cure!
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wis_poet
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2006-01-25 01:21:27]
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Re: The Corrupt Plague
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:25:52 AM AEST
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I don't see u cana improve this as u definently r a wise poet.
Wise and so true.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Corrupt Plague
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by Poetic_Influence on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:43:22 PM AEST
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| u cant fix the deilvs people, all you can do is kno that you are better |
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Re: The Corrupt Plague
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by ChrisSawyer on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 11:49:54 PM AEST
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| I think you're only speaking generally. I feel as if your poetry would be better if you had a specific issue, as far as political views go. |
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