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This Friend
Contributed by
coolbreeze17
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Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 11:44:46 PM in AEST
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i have this friend
who knows me inside and out
never seperated never changing
spending time like if we where 5
know where to go
know one to see
this friend i cared about so dear
I have a friend who met this girl
and she gave him this smile
that i hadnt seen on him since
before his mom past away
but all of a sudden
i have this friend who
all he can ever do is
cry for this girl who he loves
but she has the same problem his mom had
depression.
I have a friend who has watched one love of his life die
begin all over again with girl who took his heart away
I had a friend
i that i love so much
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coolbreeze17
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2006-01-24 23:44:46]
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Re: This Friend
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 12:30:38 AM AEST
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Beautifully written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: This Friend
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 02:04:54 AM AEST
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| Nice poem, well written. |
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Re: This Friend
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by Poetic_Influence on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:46:03 PM AEST
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| nice, did u ever think that u are the one for this friend |
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