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A Melted Soul
Contributed by
JasTrask_22
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Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 11:29:20 PM in AEST
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As much as I want to write this, I'm not permitted too.
Because right now blood doesn't rush to my veins very good.
My hearts bleeding, my brains all messed up.
It freezes up when I think of anything.. but you.
You'll always be in my memory.
A tattered soul with nothing to say.
Torn apart from the words of her enemy.
Every dream inside her fragile body;
Has now become her nightmares.
She doens't know which fantasy she can choose;
to run away to, to run away from all of this.
She wishes it wasn't real.
She wishes she could go back to yesterday;
Because she needs another day to give back,
What she never gave to him.
She thought they had everything.
He just took her without thinking.
She thought she was unbreakable.
He just left her broken and bruised
Feels like she never really had him.
But yet she's too stubborn to just let him go.
But how could she let go of something she never even had?
- - x0 J a s m i n e * _
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Re: A Melted Soul
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 11:36:33 PM AEST
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Well this is a masterpeice on it's own.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
Very wise u r. |
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Re: A Melted Soul
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 02:06:20 AM AEST
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| Good poem, you write with confidence |
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Re: A Melted Soul
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by enigma on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 10:57:14 AM AEST
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...meltdowns are painful...I had one near miss and one complete meltdown...you capture the paralyzing obsession that just simply makes life stop...
...you write very well, which means your heart, soul, spirit and mind harmonize pretty well...they are your best hope...they are within you...don't get in your way...
...thanks for sharing,
ron...enigma |
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Re: A Melted Soul
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by Poetic_Influence on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:47:17 PM AEST
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jasmine,
very nice write, emotional rollercoater of words |
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