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Fly Freely
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 10:34:53 PM in AEST
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I don't get it
I don't understand
How can the birds fly through this icy, freezing air
While I sit motionless on this cold metal chair?
Proves to me that you can fly freely any time of year
The clouds hang low as they always have
Trying to drown us all
But the point here is that with patience though hard times
You can conquer all
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Re: Fly Freely
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 10:39:47 PM AEST
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| Hm a very short, yet good poem. I liked it. Keep writing. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Fly Freely
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:01:56 AM AEST
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Strong words of wisdom and beautifull scenery
to enjoy it's beauty with.
huggs,
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Re: Fly Freely
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 12:12:42 PM AEST
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| short but sweet poem |
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Re: Fly Freely
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by Poetic_Influence on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:51:56 PM AEST
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| nice |
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