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MY poem lighthouse.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 09:07:32 PM in AEST
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I once lived in a backhouse and I loved the birdhouse.
I always wanted a blockhouse with blouse curtains on them.
But I lived once in a bunkhouse and I put the cat in the cathouse.
I had to go the next day to the courthouse.
When I came home from the courthouse I had to put the dog in the doghouse.
Then I went back insided and douse off .
I always wanted a dollhouse,but now I have a farmhouse.
I went to the firehouse ,then went by the jailhouse.
But for now I have to make what I have and live in my flophouse.
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2006-01-24 21:07:32]
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Re: MY poem lighthouse.
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by iodinelove on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 09:16:27 PM AEST
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I like it ^_^ I also like the face you used ^_^
I liked it, but I don't understand it...course I can say the same about my own writing (i have no idea what any of it is about...) anyway, continue writing, else I shall hunt you down and glue thy pen to thy hand; the paper to thy desk; thy desk to thy feet; thy feet to the floor...etc. ^_^
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Re: MY poem lighthouse.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 10:46:13 PM AEST
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| Um, im confused.. Sorry. |
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Re: MY poem lighthouse.
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 02:54:09 AM AEST
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No confussion here. U r really good with your unque way of writing.
I see u taking the good, bad, funny to gether in a write and weaving an awesome poem.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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