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A rose of only thorns
Contributed by
In_a_while
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Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 07:41:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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hug me.... this rose of only thorns
i wish to make you mine
My love, my loveless...
Kiss me.... these lips of razor blades
i wish to rake your lies
My love, my loveless...
Touch me... this skin of wrinkled smiles
i wish to break your bones
My love, my loveless...
You hate me, it's lotion on my heart
I love you, it's peeling off my skin
You hate me, it's soothing my decision
I love you, it's tying a noose above me
Twinkle twinkle, leather skin
Won't you rip and let me in
Up above my pills too high
Like an angel soon to cry...
Mother...
dw
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Re: A rose of only thorns
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by MysticFireFairy on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 07:45:33 PM AEST
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| Interesting poem I really like it.. |
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Re: A rose of only thorns
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 10:11:38 PM AEST
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| wow, interesting and deep poem. i think you say a lot in so little. i enjoyed it, very creative, awesome job |
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Re: A rose of only thorns
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 10:12:44 PM AEST
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| Beautifull. *Rose* |
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Re: A rose of only thorns
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 01:17:41 AM AEST
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WoW Dwayne this is brilliantly penned. Deep, dark and thought provoking. You are a real master when it comes to these sorta writes.
Twinkle twinkle, leather skin
Won't you rip and let me in
Up above my pills too high
Like an angel soon to cry...
Mother...
Absolutely sensational. Well done Dwayne and keep up with the awesome work.
*warm hugs*
~*sue*~ |
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Re: A rose of only thorns
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by Poetic_Influence on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 02:08:19 PM AEST
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| nice |
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