|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Birds Eye View
Contributed by
boobiepeach
on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 07:02:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
|
Mount and demolish your apple pie
Sparkling man that floats through, up high
Faultless in nature and taintless to thine
Move up in winter and stand oh so shy
Tidy is mind that has not a scale
A graceful thought that has much to hale
Roll out a carpet that I deserve none
Innocent woman in blood holding gun
Fresh in the mind and so spick and span
Blank canvas is waiting, hold out your hand
Elegant but simple in moving too quick
Neat and orderly in which makes one sick
Jump to the past and rewind the to come
Pure intentioned rise of stainless thumb
Delicate hand tainted by one
Unpolluted sky cloudy, now done
A well-kept view that has seen no birds eye
My words and ganders simple, keep your apple pie
Copyright ©
boobiepeach
... [
2006-01-24 19:02:49]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Birds Eye View
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 02:29:37 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very creative writing.
huggs,
emy |
|
|
Re: Birds Eye View
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 12:26:43 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nicely penned, good chosen words. |
|
|
Re: Birds Eye View
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 10:06:37 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Unicque
Sinned |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
