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slumber in the midst
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 01:02:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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a kinder orange faced me today as the light breeze sang sweet melodies
a gentle pass of snow in the night gives me a morning diamond wake
the freshness of the air and the spirit it invokes a moving state
the slowness of the wake eases the spite of anger a new days fate
the streak of colour blinding the senses the view it"s angelic in its whole
the darkness of the night fading slowly the moonlight taking its turn
a new night creeping slowly another dream in the making begins to earn
the light fading as as the stars make there nightly yearn
a new wash of faith a grasp of the surreal as the new day dawns
its merging of the seasons plaine a slumber in the midst
as the early fog covers the land in a slow fading wisp
only a new sun rises could the beauty be eclipse
i face this day in a whole new way chaos it sleeps for now
it will rise again as i try to win but thats something i cant foresee
i will remain placid and calm as to let me be me
but thats all i can really do to make sure i can see
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2006-01-24 13:02:58]
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Re: slumber in the midst
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by enigma on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 03:36:44 PM AEST
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...I Loved the title...I was shutting off my computer in preparation to leave work and thought I'd take a quick look see...your title, "slumber in the mist," grabbed me...the whole poem had a spirit of acceptance...a sense that whatever came, could be handled...I believe that is the Truth that eludes so many of us...
...thanks,
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Re: slumber in the midst
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 03:45:03 PM AEST
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Reagan I love your writes they are always captivating and always very well written. The imagery u cast into ur readers head is absolutely sensational. You've done a superb job with this one. Well done.
*warm hugs*
~*sue*~ |
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