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you can't dance here
Contributed by
jessejames
on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 08:54:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the angel of death
dances at my feet
starving for a soul to eat
starving for death
and nothing more
but i won't give
what he hungers for
so dance below
or even beside me,
but you'll never dance
with or inside me
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jessejames
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2006-01-23 20:54:10]
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Re: you can't dance here
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 08:55:18 PM AEST
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loved the style and scheme here.Its strong!
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Re: you can't dance here
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 09:15:28 PM AEST
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Great metaphor!! Well done.
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Re: you can't dance here
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 10:49:21 PM AEST
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| Cool write. Peace, Laura |
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Re: you can't dance here
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 03:58:46 AM AEST
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Very good, true write. he's always trying but a strong will kicks him out of the way.
huggs, peace,
emy |
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