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You have broken me
Contributed by
chulysnacky
on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 04:22:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hurt is like no other
This you made me discover
I thought it was a dream...
So happy did we seem..
I guess it was a fluke
The thought of you makes me wanna puke!
You said you wouldn't hurt me....
Instead you just desert me...
You left me in the dust
The hurt I feel...its far too much...
Too hard for me to bare,
I don't even wanna comb my hair!
How foolish indeed i was..
I thought God sent you from above
You were so precious
That night that we made love
But now the tears are endless
Inside I feel so helpless., to think that we could be...
A couple so in love
Instead we have no trust
To think of it...not even lust
You know what?...I can't even take it!
It's driving me nuts!
How chaotic does it seem
You make me just wanna scream.
This definately has to be a cruel dream.
I would have never thought that "YOU" could have been so mean.
It seems to be just so easy for you.
It's like you almost always knew.
I can't believe you really have me here cryin'
I must admit i was really ****** tryin,
To be as honest as can be,
To unvail the real me.!
I promise myself that I won't ever try again,
The love that I want is with him.
Whenever I see you
I'll have to leave the room,
'Cause then I'll start to cry
My feelings deep inside I must hide.
4 everyone I see
A mystery shall I be
No one will ever know
Nor feelings will I show.!...
Copyright ©
chulysnacky
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2006-01-23 16:22:11]
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Re: You have broken me
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by OzChick on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 07:12:05 PM AEST
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I have definitely felt this way before. Good rhythm and rhyme. Written with real emotion.
The moderator caught the banned word but they missed the misspelled one, 'unvail' should be 'unveil'.
Other than that, good write.
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Re: You have broken me
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 11:00:50 PM AEST
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chulysnacky-
Nice! Yeah I defiently have felt like you have before. Put time actually heals all wounds, but the scars still show. |
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