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Tears as They Fall
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 01:36:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Running off of my face
These tears fall into place
Rolling onto the ground
Where I lay, face down
Into the dirt they fall
All I hear is a crow's call,
Music of life’s sorrows
And all its dark burrows
Into mud I lay my head
The ground is my bed,
Where I lay down at night
And cry as I lose the Fight
Screams of hell are heard,
I listen to the harsh words,
These tears fall from my eyes
Just an ingredient to my cries
Everyone walks around
This girl on the ground
Ignoring her cries of despair,
Don’t give the slightest care
Tears as they fall,
Screams and calls,
Fights and cries,
Tears from my eyes,
Tears as they fall
Amongst my calls,
Tears from my eyes
Amongst my cries
Running off of my face
These tears fall into place
Rolling onto the ground
Where I lay, face down
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Re: Tears as They Fall
(User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 02:17:23 AM AEST
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Nice write-
I liked the 5th vers best as it is so true-
Often our cries for help fall upon deaf ears-
No one wishes to get involved as they have tears of their own to shed:
Joe
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Re: Tears as They Fall
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 07:47:56 PM AEST
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| i loved this one also. It was an awesome write. and it seems that when, we're crying for help, that no one's there and no one really even cares, but dont worry, cause i'm here for you! Awesome job! |
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Re: Tears as They Fall
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 07:04:48 PM AEST
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Sprints this is a heart-wrenching piece, and I hope your love life is less tragic these days. I also see you haven't posted much since I've been gone...I look forward to catching up with ya. Take Care.
Scorp. |
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