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poem 13
Contributed by
Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone
on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 10:56:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My life is one endless mistake after mistake,
And so on.
Cold touches,
Cold,
Nasty looks and glares.
Feelings of loneliness.
No one I'm such a *****.
Maybe this is what the person upstairs had planned for me,
Maybe not.
Who really knows anymore.
Maybe my time has come to end it all.
Cold,
Empty,
Emotions (confusion, sadness, anger, loneliness, etc.),
Heartless.
This is what I feel.
"End it all now while you still can,"
Says a voice.
I ignore it as best I can.
It's getting harder though.
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Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone
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2006-01-22 22:56:22]
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Re: poem 13
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by emystar on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 03:01:22 AM AEST
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This is so sad but written well. Hang tuff, my friend. U r much stronger than u think.
U must learn from your mistakes but take it easy on your self. We all mess up and make mistakes but that don't make us a bad person.
Luv, huggs, prayer,
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Re: poem 13
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 12:12:14 PM AEST
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| A sad poem, mistakes are always made, but we learn from them. |
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