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This is me.
Contributed by
happybunnyfan
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Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 08:19:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The pain you can see
Is the person I don’t want to be,
I’ve tried my very best
But I didn’t pass the ultimate test,
My future shatters before my eyes
Faith, hope and Love dies,
Emotions froze cold
In a house where secrets go untold,
The person I’ve become to be
Is the pain that you can see.
Copyright ©
happybunnyfan
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2006-01-22 20:19:51]
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Re: This is me.
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by needs_change on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 09:36:16 PM AEST
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| i love it dude!! keep up the good work!! |
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Re: This is me.
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by Honesty_strikes_my_pen on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 09:38:30 PM AEST
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Love it! Good write, keep it ^
TLC,
~Honesty~ |
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Re: This is me.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 12:14:58 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, so much pain though. |
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