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~*Empty Garden*~
Contributed by
Capergirl_23
on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Slowly fading from the light,
Away from human touch.
Never have I ever thought,
That I could love so much.
From dying petals,
On withered stems.
No amount of apologies,
Would ever mend.
The blood that flows,
From that first prick.
Of thorns amongst the beauty.
Time begins to tick,
But slowly fades away.
No love lost.
No love anyway.
For the day it all began,
It was taken all from me.
No more beauty in this garden,
No more beauty left to see...
Copyright ©
Capergirl_23
... [
2003-01-26 21:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: ~*Empty Garden*~
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by Fiona on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:44:00 PM AEST
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Wow! What a wonderful poem! I loved it, you are a very passionate writer. keep it up.
Lots of Luv, *Fiona* |
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Re: ~*Empty Garden*~
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:44:49 PM AEST
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this is an amazing write, very deep, love it.. also how you bring it around full circle..
and hey hey thanx for the inspiration for wolfflow and me on our unfinished poem:)
huggs always nessa |
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Re: ~*Empty Garden*~
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:45:45 PM AEST
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So very sad.....nicely done! Larry :o)
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Re: ~*Empty Garden*~
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by venkat on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 01:36:36 AM AEST
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| beautiful write..venkat |
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Re: ~*Empty Garden*~
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:19:33 AM AEST
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Wow this is beautiful! So deep. I love it. Excellent write!
~ Moonlit Angel |
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