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Giving Birth To A Poem
Contributed by
Willofree
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Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 12:58:31 PM in AEST
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Premonition phase
Some early desire is triggered
Not yet conceptualized
Waiting in the pre-dawn to be recognized
So the idea may materialize
Conception phase
A mental orgasm is experienced
A wow and a flash of inspiration occurs
And an idea is consummated, monumental
A merging of the emotional and the mental
Pregnancy phase
Then the thinking, nurturing and pondering start
And the body swells to accomodate this part
One must digest and comprehend the concept
To make it to the next stage of development
Delivery phase
You begin to analyze and figure it out
Now the idea is finally coming out
Expressed by grunting, pain and contractions
A struggle to transfer conceptually to action
Birth phase
Finally the construct of an idea is formed
With a final tremendous push
The viable structure of an idea is born
And from an idea the birth of a poem is transformed
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Re: Giving Birth To A Poem
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 01:07:57 PM AEST
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Terry, my friend, interesting comparison with childbirth. It did bring a smile to my face. The Conception Stage is my favorite. That is so right on.
A mental orgasm is experienced
A wow and a flash of inspiration occurs
And an idea is consummated, monumental
A merging of the emotional and the mental
Wonderful Terry. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Giving Birth To A Poem
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 01:16:06 PM AEST
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OMG! I never realised having a poem was so difficult! I once gave birth to one with just over a thousand words but I have a few that are a lot lighter in the word department!.
I loved the parallels here very cleverly crafted a well deserved 5 stars.
J |
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Re: Giving Birth To A Poem
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by bernard2 on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 01:33:35 PM AEST
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| Sounds just right for the birth of a poem.Something out of the ordinary.peace bernard2 |
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Re: Giving Birth To A Poem
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 03:38:43 PM AEST
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| Impressive write. |
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Re: Giving Birth To A Poem
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 03:40:46 PM AEST
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Great poem, Will.....Right on the button, I'd say.
Loved this..
Jenni |
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Re: Giving Birth To A Poem
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by catz77 on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 04:45:52 PM AEST
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great poem
catz
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Re: Giving Birth To A Poem
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by olasunkanmi on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 07:11:38 AM AEST
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| woderful write!!. Have something similar to this. Mind looking it up? it was title RAVEL. |
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Re: Giving Birth To A Poem
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 12:51:05 PM AEST
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I think Terry, that were one to look back through your early writes ... and finish up here ... what they would discover is ... the birthing of a poet. I am continually impressed and curious what direction you will travel next. Something different ? Yes indeed ... and impressively so.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Giving Birth To A Poem
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 01:19:20 AM AEST
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Interesting analogies. Me likes. Thanks.  |
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