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Be Not...
Contributed by
kareless
on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 06:42:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I don't know what to do from here...
I have no idea what's behind that door I so drastically fear.
I loathe the nights I toss and turn;
I run circles in dreams that seem endless in churn.
Far fetched; control is lost...
how much will this confusion thus cost?
My mind, my heart, my sanity -- then what, for why? -- must I continue to try?
Faith lost - hope gone.
Nothing to motivate these ungreased wheels.
Nothing to set motion upon these tired heels.
Bridges burning that lead to any future I dream.
I'm headed straight for the bottom, or though it would seem.
I think -- and think
to answers I beg to return to my thoughts before my hope does perilessly sink.
To join the crowd -- to feel again --
Nothing to nowhere I fear I will end.
Make haste, for my breaths are steadily ceasing;
to catch not a wind of oxygen to inhale ~ will the last thing I complete,
be not but to fail?
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kareless
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2006-01-22 06:42:32]
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Re: Be Not...
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by charmer on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 10:35:23 AM AEST
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| this was a really great poem! I wish i could come up with somthing like that! Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Be Not...
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by crazy on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 10:51:45 AM AEST
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| ok i like this such great use of words and loved how they flowed this is how i feel yet i have the feeling of emptyness fantastic poem |
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Re: Be Not...
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 03:36:47 PM AEST
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| I like the flow. Good write. |
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