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need you
Contributed by
Honesty_strikes_my_pen
on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 06:58:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I need your hand,
to hold.
I need you heart,
to gently unfold.
I need your eyes,
to gaze into.
I need your ear,
to whisper into.
I need your lips,
to kiss oh so tenderly.
I need your neck,
to caress innocently.
I need you hair,
to wipe out of your eyes.
I need your tears,
so I can kiss away your cries.
I need your love,
to have some affection.
I need your body,
to once again feel protection.
I need you here,
so I no longer cry.
I need you,
because he's just another lie.
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Honesty_strikes_my_pen
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2006-01-21 18:58:44]
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Re: need you
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 06:14:51 AM AEST
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| Beautiful, yet that last line reveals sadness to me. Nice write, hope all goes well. |
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Re: need you
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 12:48:01 AM AEST
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| I was just scannning the poems and this caught my eye, i felt the pain, great write |
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Re: need you
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by Lo2681 on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 09:46:06 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. I hate feeling that need. Isn't it hard? You'll be ok.
~Lo |
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Re: need you
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by Somnium on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 02:57:06 PM AEST
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When you sit the other side of the room
from that one person
and they don't know why you stare
it's the hardest thing in the world
Dry tears fall upon the desk
And shatters down your walls
Ben
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