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Feet On Ground - Shmokin
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Shmokin
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Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 06:02:43 PM in AEST
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Feet On Ground
Feet on ground, feet on ground
Solid on Terra Firma
Feet on ground, feet on ground
Never listen to your heart murmur
LaLa Land, LaLa Land
A place you'd like to know
LaLa Land, LaLa Land
But your not allowed to go
Common sense, common sense
A skill you clearly lack
Common sense, common sense
You need to get back on track
The logical thing, the logical thing
Surely you know it makes sense
The logical thing, the logical thing
Only recognised in past tense
Live and learn, live and learn
A mistake is a lesson wrapped in pain
Live and learn, live and learn
When knocked down, you gotta get back up again.
XShmokinX
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2006-01-21 18:02:43]
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Re: Feet On Ground - Shmokin
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 09:03:43 PM AEST
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| There were good thoughts in this one, it got me thinking about some of your one-liners here. Nice write. |
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Re: Feet On Ground - Shmokin
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by PoeticHybrid on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 06:02:56 PM AEST
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| A great write. The repetition really helps drive the point home. |
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