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COME CLEAN
Contributed by
hdhatcher
on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 03:04:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I prayed for rain today
I clasped my hands and kneeled
But the sun won’t go away
Long enough for me to heal
Afraid of letting go
So to the past I cling
I’ll try to wash you all away
But I’ll remember everything
Where have you gone
I just can’t seem to mend
The only thing I know
Our beginning has an end
And I would trade it all
Everything of worth
To break these chains that bind
And free me from what hurts
If I could make you disappear
I could wipe away my tears
But the entire time
You have been right here
Now that you’ve gone away
I don’t know how to feel
I can’t tell what is fake
Or even what is real
Where have you gone
I just can’t seem to mend
The only thing I know
Our beginning has an end
And I would trade it all
Everything of worth
To break these chains that bind
And free me from what hurts
If I could live again
And start my life anew
I would live my life
And still remember you
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hdhatcher
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Re: COME CLEAN
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by crazy on
Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 11:47:33 AM AEST
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sounds like you have gotten your heart broke
well i tell youfrom my exsprence
you never forget and it bulids up so much that one day you explode from it and all you have left is that memorie to make you smile or make you cry
but it never goes away i have just learned hopw to live with it and the way i try to make my depression go away is replace it with a more enjoyably thought
nicly writen poem |
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Re: COME CLEAN
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by Poetic_Influence on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 02:55:42 PM AEST
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| nice poem but i dont understand how it was read so much |
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Re: COME CLEAN
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by Matariel on
Thursday, 16th April 2009 @ 06:53:44 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, and yet tragic. Nicely done. |
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Re: COME CLEAN
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by kmec1990 on
Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 03:29:11 PM AEST
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| touching, well written |
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Re: COME CLEAN
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 14th February 2015 @ 09:12:39 PM AEST
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| Very good. You certainly came clean with that one. |
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