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The Insatiable Of The Night
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 05:01:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Seized by the woodworm
The cover rises slowly
Roaring
Angry the winds gush
Between the four walls
Covered with old webs
Where they crawl sorely
Pestilential reptiles
His congested eyes
Overstep the dark darkness
Scanty times lit up
For rays shot to the glasses
Loaded of moss
He leaves slowly
Showing his greenish face
Cadaverous
Fastening a dry glance in the objective
With infinite disdain
His enormous feet
They move forward heavily
In a slow walk
But resolved
In His rigid lips it's distended
A terrifying smile
Cunning
When approximates of the sacrificed one
His tenacious hands
Of starved vulture
Don't let to escape the prey
Already dominated
In the prey eyes they are reflected
A mixed of fear and anxiety
Also her
Waits to be satiated
By Fernanda F. Rocha©
Copyright ©
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2006-01-21 05:01:57]
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Re: The Insatiable Of The Night
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 07:43:09 AM AEST
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nice imagery
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Re: The Insatiable Of The Night
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 07:46:45 AM AEST
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nice imagery
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Re: The Insatiable Of The Night
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 12:39:59 PM AEST
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| great poem |
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Re: The Insatiable Of The Night
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 01:30:49 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: The Insatiable Of The Night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 12:58:34 PM AEST
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Yes, I agree, great imagery here. I also like the feelings of darkness you have so well conveyed!
Great job on this!!! |
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