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dog dead eyes
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 08:21:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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dog dead tired i flake in my sway
to many memories to easly face the day
licking my wounds dragging feet on the ground
mind blank and lost need coffee to be found
the fetus i fry to sad eyes looking front
wondering why the didnt survive the hunt
down hearted view my window displays
sun trying to shine but clouds do betray
bills in the box collectors on the phone
remembering why i always ran from home
childhood lies growing up is not fun
just wanting to kick back and lay in the sun
the bottle it whines "why face reality today"
but with out work those bills wont get paid
old habbit thoughts of addiction with out care
as that reality was just a heartful tear
ear buds in place to block out contact
to affraid to break this heart thats intact
off on the road the start of the day
mabey ill get hit walking on the way
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Re: dog dead eyes
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 10:21:20 PM AEST
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| Some misspelled words.....but the message...my god it just was so lonely. Wow...you wrote that so well. I could feel myself there. I wish you peace, and thanks for sharing, Laura |
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Re: dog dead eyes
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by brew on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 10:36:11 PM AEST
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Come on Regan..............Yes, its lonley and we all have it bad........But CHEER up. Get out, and stop the sad. Make it good..........or try. Yes, its an every day routine, and we all have those @@@@.....days......But......COme on, alot of ppl here care bout ya. Heres a BIG virtual HUG..........
Brew~ |
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Re: dog dead eyes
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by emystar on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 12:34:52 AM AEST
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Very sad, my friend.
Cheer up!
We luv u.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: dog dead eyes
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by bernard2 on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 01:42:20 PM AEST
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| Cheer up things are nevers as bad as they seem bernard2 |
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