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As The Time Ticks

Contributed by sprinter27 on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 01:34:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



As I watch the clock move
I think of how much I like you

As the time ticks away
I miss you more everyday

I wan't the time to freeze
So you won't forget me

Soon I will just be a name
One who played in the game

As the time ticks
I'm hit with conflicts

Tears will fall as I cry
When we say goodbye

With a hug recieved
I wil feel decieved

I never want you to leave
But the clock disagrees

As I sit and watch it move
I can't stop thinking of you

As the clock ticks away
I can' t face what's our way

The clock determines our fate
Tells us when were early or late

The clock drives what we do,
It tells me when to leave you

As the time ticks away
I miss you everyday

As I sit and watch it move
I can't stop thinking of you




Copyright © sprinter27 ... [ 2006-01-20 13:34:43]
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Re: As The Time Ticks (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 04:08:18 PM AEST
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a very heart felt post ty for sharing
r.m.wilder


Re: As The Time Ticks (User Rating: 1 )
by SmileSkinDeep on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 06:07:49 PM AEST
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Nicely done, I really like it, especially:

"As the time ticks away
I miss you more everyday

I want the time to freeze
So you won't forget me"

good write

~April


Re: As The Time Ticks (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 10:40:25 PM AEST
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Inner heart write, yet....there is always TIME.thats what we all have....so dont watch the clock and dwell.....Go get em.! Make the time stop, and freeze for the love.! If it goes out, it can be found again. Loved the fact, you want to stop time for them.
Nice post

Brew~


Re: As The Time Ticks (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 09:33:20 PM AEST
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Pretty good, some rhymes seemed forced, but the general concept and format was a good idea. thanks for posting.


Re: As The Time Ticks (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 07:43:46 PM AEST
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awesome job. I loved it! it rhymed really well and i ejoyed reading it. again i must say, AWESOME JOB!




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