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Losing
Contributed by
PainfulSpirit06
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Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:16:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I sit back and reflect on the past year
So I'll know what to change for this one
As I reflect, I realize I've lost myself
I'm not the same joyous person I once was
I don't associate with the same people
I don't even talk the same
I care less about other people and things
And I've lost more people physically and spirtually
than I want to count
Friend I thought were true, I've grown apart from
Aroung more unreal people than I want
Situations containing nothing but problems
in my way all day
which caused more people to be lost...
More reflecting made me realize that
I DEFINITELY don't want this year to be
the same as the last
And now I have to sit back and go find myself
All the while, in the back of mind
there's a little voice whispering to me
"Was it worth losing yourself?"
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Re: Losing
(User Rating: 1 ) by flamingblade on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:34:18 PM AEST (User
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wow this is really good i like it. it kind of sounds like what I write. good job , keep it up. |
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Re: Losing
(User Rating: 1 ) by boobiepeach on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 01:16:50 PM AEST (User
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sad to say i have felt this way.
but soon you will find a new spin.
just as all fails a small win will grow to large
and find your self in you own mind it will be easier to find you in others eyes.
touching write
peach |
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