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Stares
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 11:21:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I just don't know anymore
But I care as much as ever
I no longer know what's best for me
But these deep stares have been deeper than ever
Hear all your stories
Tidings of great joy
You've all lifted so much
Yet I've always stayed down
When death seems like a good idea
My frowns have leveled out into more blank stares
But who cares anyways?
I'm officially confused about everything
Always back to step one
Where I've begun every day of my life
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the_story_of_the_year
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2006-01-20 11:21:52]
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Re: Stares
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by flamingblade on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:35:53 PM AEST
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| very real. sounds like your having a hard time. good luck and i really like this piece. |
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Re: Stares
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by bernard2 on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:38:04 PM AEST
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| We all have to begin at step one only you yourself can make it to any further steps.peace from bernard2 |
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Re: Stares
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 05:56:04 PM AEST
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| its easier to slow then fall good post ty |
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