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I walked away
Contributed by
XXpurpleducktapeXX
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Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 02:40:50 AM in AEST
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I walked outside and smelled the air,
I got a heartful and all i thought about was you,
I can't believe you left me over a bunch of ****like that,
You knew i still loved u i couldn't hold back,
I still do love you and probably alwayz will,
For the fact that i love you,
You think i'll take you back.
So I look at the sky trying to think back,
But it hurts so much i don't want to look back,
So i look at the ground and walk back inside,
Knowing i never tried!
-_-Amanda-_-
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Re: I walked away
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 08:34:27 AM AEST
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| your poem lets me know, that I was ok back when, and am still, oh yes, in love, crazy in love, what happened to those I loved and where are they now, I pray still, love, never lost me, and I never have ever regretted my feelings which took me to that place... a blessing from the Lord, if only for a short while. Raquel Leah |
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Re: I walked away
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by boobiepeach on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 01:49:20 PM AEST
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great write
i my opinion it is always good to remember your past loves. but looking back can be painful. great write and i am glad you walked back inside.
peach |
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Re: I walked away
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 09:44:38 AM AEST
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| This is a very good poem amanda i liked it .. |
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Re: I walked away
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Wednesday, 5th January 2011 @ 11:30:25 AM AEST
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| Great poem! I love how you say when you smell the air you think of him. |
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