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Hoarse Sense
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:06:01 AM in AEST
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My voice of reason has grown hoarse
Gone galloping through my mind
Painfully uttering
Guttural cries
Trotting through the gardens
Of my discarded dreams
Disturbing the dust that
Had settled over
Unsettling memories
Cantering through consciousness
Distorting vision with its
Incessant, irrepressible
Caterwauling
A wise man once wrote
“Passion rules reason.”
Thank you Terry, for being
Both good and kind
Providing me the means
By which to break and tame
These wild whisperings
I rein them in and
Saddle them with abstract art
Bridle them with brilliant beauty
Corralling them within uncertain imagery
Spurred on by blinding color
And in the end
I lead them back into the stable
Where they wait benignly
For a chance to bolt again
My voice of reason has grown
Horse ?
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Author's Note:
Passion rules reason, is the wizard's third rule.
The rules are presented in a series of books from
author Terry Goodkind, called the Sword Of Truth.
At present, there are nine books to the series. A
highly anticipated tenth novel is scheduled for a June
release. I have read them all, and found great wisdom
and enjoyment in his writings. Thank you again, Terry.
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2006-01-20 00:06:01]
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Re: Hoarse Sense
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by SocialMisfit on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 01:29:08 AM AEST
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creative, i liked the play on words, its so much fun :P gratz on a cool write.
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Re: Hoarse Sense
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 06:08:41 AM AEST
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Excellent write.
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Re: Hoarse Sense
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 07:38:45 AM AEST
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Well done Naz on producing a perfectly penned piece of poetry. You have such an amazing style of writing and your work is always a treasured experience to your reader. Well done once again and keep up the awesome work.
*warm hugs*
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Re: Hoarse Sense
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 08:48:10 AM AEST
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| N---aaaay-aa-aaa-ay. Loved it, thank you, curtsy applaud, keep it up, you know you will, I can feel you already thinking up something else. Raquel Leah |
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Re: Hoarse Sense
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by brew on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 10:26:17 AM AEST
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Very creative, and neat post.! Loved the horse, abstract. Keep going, your on a roll.
Brew~ |
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Re: Hoarse Sense
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:44:41 PM AEST
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ooooh I love word play! give that man a bag of apples and a sugar lump!
Seriously a very impressive piece all power to stephy for inspiring you.
J |
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Re: Hoarse Sense
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 01:03:07 PM AEST
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Hmmm me thinks I have a new series to track down and read!!!
Thanks for that... and thanks for this!
Clever play on words, you are truely a WordMaster!! |
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Re: Hoarse Sense
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 12:57:36 PM AEST
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Naz,
Well I felt roped into reading this the minute I saw the title. Yes, a very clever play on words.
...."For a chance to bolt again." And wild horses couldn't keep me from coraling those passions all over again.....
Delightful poem, Nazzy
Will/Terry
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