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Gone
Contributed by
Shellie
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Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 11:59:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Once again you're out of my life
and this time it's for good
All you did was charge me with strife
you never acted as you should
You never showed me you cared
about how I really feel
I should have been prepared
for it was all to surreal
I thought I was lucky to have you
but, really, it was the other way around
I'm tierribly content we're through
now my smile will never be a frown
You were nothing but a liar
nothing you ever said possessed any truth
I thought you were my only desire
then I remember: I am merely in youth
Copyright ©
Shellie
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2006-01-19 23:59:47]
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Re: Gone
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:57:47 AM AEST
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| Very honest. Good job. |
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Re: Gone
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 12:38:39 PM AEST
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I am merely in youth too!
(well in my head I am)
-what's that saying?....
You're only as old as the person you feel!
You know I've been in that situation once or twice you think someone is wonderful then when it all goes pear shaped
( and the relationship ends),
you stand back and think "how the hell did I put up with her/him?"
of course non of my exes would say such a thing about a wonderful person such as myself!(yeah right!)
I type to much I must get out more.
Moving swiftly on to the reason for commenting on this work.
A well written and nicely rhymed piece.
J |
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Re: Gone
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by boobiepeach on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 01:55:16 PM AEST
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greatly done. a single needle of hope in a hay stack of otherwise horrid thoughts.
i am glad you write is as strong as your heart.
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Re: Gone
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by Poetic_Influence on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 04:01:47 PM AEST
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| nice |
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