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empty arms
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 01:52:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hurriedly chased you in dream after dream
but catching you turns you to sand
leaving me skipping pebbles across an ocean of longing
the ripples encompassing without any sign of fading
once I leant in to kiss you and closed my eyes
but a slight breeze had carried you away
in the distance wavering like summer washing lines
my frail reflection waits
leaving a mute sadness longing to be heard
and for all its efforts dying
with the crashing symphony
of a million tiny raindrops
all screaming towards redemption
panic erupts, expelled outward in gratuitous flames
a heart held aloft in poets hands
akin to a violin with only one string
fearful of the promises of symphonic bliss
leaving beauty in its frailty
like butterfly wings to a childs eager grasp
no intent to destroy
but love cannot be built on best intentions
the harder you grasp
the sooner it slips away
leaving memories and longing
to exist only in dreams
where even then i cannot hold you forever
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Re: empty arms
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 02:49:51 PM AEST (User
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This was beautiful and i really mean that. I thought that it was well written and it flowed and everything about it made it so beautifully sad and it also filled me with that emotion you talked about when you just wanna hold someone in your arms forever. I had that chance and it was perfect but then it got away from me and it turned into the most beautiful disaster of my life.
take care
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