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Within Me

Contributed by Ice_Fox on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 11:31:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Journey deep within my mind
No one can tell you what you’ll find,
You’ll choke on hate
You’ll drown in tears
You’ll gaze upon four broken mirrors
There’s no way out,
The door is shut.
That pain you feel?
My bleeding cut!
I hate the world
That hate’s my drive
To make sure no one’s left alive!

I don’t kill for cause,
There’s no evil to smite,
Here is the real me thrown into the light!
The me that is beaten,
Rejected and cruel,
I seek me no power,
There’s nothing to rule!

There’s nothing to hope for,
There’s no room to dream,
When I’m twisted and evil
And splitting at seams!
I know no surrender
And mercy fails me,
Count all your blessings that you are still free.

Free from my terror,
My hatred so dark
Protected by light and your one sacred mark,
Know that if you stray
From light such as this
That you will be hunted
By saddened darkness.

So what do you do
When nothing goes right?
Your hate is your refuge
Your blinded to light

You suffer and sin,
And when they come to call
You’re only the wicked
You’re blamed for it all.

Your history melts you
Rips you apart
You’re constantly drowning
In your ravaged heart
The horrors you suffer
Can never be killed
They torment you always
With uncaring will

You ravage your actions
You kill for no cause
You smile and laugh
At your blood tainted claws.
Your mind is repulsive,
Mutated and wrong
You’ve never been able
To hear the birdsong.


Your loneliness haunts you
And pounds through your veins
You convince all others
To follow your reign,
For spreading the hatred
Lessens the pain
Though never escaping
The life that you feign.

So welcome to darkness
Welcome to me
Welcome to all things that you’ll never be
Welcome to sorrow,
For now you are blind.
Now you’re not eluding
You’re trapped in my cage
You’re always to feel my insufferable rage
And you’ll never escape
The terrors you find
Forever degraded,
In depths of my mind.





Copyright © Ice_Fox ... [ 2006-01-18 23:31:47]
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Re: Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 06:16:18 AM AEST
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Well done, i liked it


Re: Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Fernanda_F_Rocha on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 06:25:45 AM AEST
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A very strong piece! seems to me self punishment ... disenchant of life ... a complete discredit of everything, specially of Yourself. Hardly a person writes this poem is that bad .... just need to find some peace and a path to rest the hurt feelings with the hope light on it :)
Good writing!


Re: Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by UKRaVeN on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 07:13:26 AM AEST
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very deep

very good




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