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Erotic type of love
Contributed by
poetic_influence
on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 07:29:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Can't explain how I feel
When you touch me I get chills
The feeling is unreal
All my fantasies become fufilled
The whole image of you defines sex appeal
I dont usually beg but if you want me to I will
Your eyes
Beautiful brown eyes looking at me
It's no surprise
How they make me melt like cotton candy
Your lips
Suculant soft lips kissing me
I need this
Your love sudicing me so blissfully
Your so perfect
Yet so forbidden
But its worth it
To know all the love that could be given
Like a fire that burns so brite
You so badly want to feel it
Even if it hurts all night
The desire is there and you feel the need to steal it
And now I have it in my arms
No one can take it away
I can endure no harm
I can only say
Take me over my prince
You said you would shake me
And I am so convinced
I need you baby
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Re: Erotic type of love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 08:07:32 PM AEST
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| wow great poem, love the imagery! |
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Re: Erotic type of love
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 08:13:43 PM AEST
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| Couple of spelling errors....but an excellent erotic write. Very beautiful. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Erotic type of love
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 08:18:23 PM AEST
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Not at all bad. But... I do so dislike the word "succulent" to describe the lips... it means "juicy", for crying out loud. It's used to describe plants and fruit.
Ah well. Keep writing, eh?
Andrew |
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Re: Erotic type of love
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by lost_chadow on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 08:24:01 PM AEST
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| I love it, reminds me of how I used to write...oops! Almost shed a tear, but my hat's off to you. |
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