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Chip stone from my face...
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 06:16:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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From flesh become stone
clouds gather to sea
what monster has grown
depression in me
chip stone from my face
reveal what's concealed
a smile in its place?
or a burning black field?
I'm worn out from the storm
my features are fading
stone's not reborn
so why am i waiting
are statues soul-less?
am i a stone fate?
my tears should now know this
because it's too late...
dw
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2006-01-18 18:16:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Chip stone from my face...
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 11:26:48 AM AEST (User
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This was a really good poem! it was well written and it flowed beautifully. I thought this was emotional and i really liked it..
thanks for the comment.
take care
christina |
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