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Not the person youd wish id been
Contributed by
UKRaVeN
on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 04:41:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I’ve never known what to believe
Is this real what I see?
A dream inside of me
Taking over within
Deep inside of me
I feel the guilt please set me free
Like a cancer of my mind
It takes me deeper down
A sinner to this world and beyond
Trying hard to let go
Trying hard to find my serenity
I just need to get away
The light i see,i wish to believe
in all its power in all its majesty
lift my head into the mirror i see
im sorry im not the person you wished id been
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UKRaVeN
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2006-01-18 16:41:55]
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Re: Not the person youd wish id been
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 04:47:29 PM AEST
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| a interesting write ty for posting it |
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Re: Not the person youd wish id been
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 04:48:47 PM AEST
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| good poem sometimes you just gotta do what makes you happy though i know its a horrible feeling when you feel you've failed someone |
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Re: Not the person youd wish id been
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by kidnic on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 05:15:00 PM AEST
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nice write...
Sometimes letting go is just a matter of seeing the light in a situation. |
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Re: Not the person youd wish id been
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by Sparda on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 05:29:42 PM AEST
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Not bad matey boy!, yeh, pub sounds like fun...windsor tho, I hate slough, dammit..
Keep writing this stuff, one day we'll all be famous and then we can look back at what a crappy depressing excuse for a life we once led...heh heh, tc dude..
-Sparda
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Re: Not the person youd wish id been
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 06:23:06 PM AEST
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| I like this a lot. |
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