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My Demon
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drapes
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Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 03:53:31 PM in AEST
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My best friend, my worst emeny.
You're everywhere I go, but totally invisible.
How do I ever feel alone when you're constantly on my side?
You put a damper on my life, but as time goes on, I happen to depend on you.
I fear you, my constant companion. You may someday rule my life.
How did I ever live without you? But how free I'd be if you just let me go...
Hot and firey, but so icey cold.
Wieghtless, but such a burden to drag around.
Rivalry
Envy
Greed
Jealousy.
Copyright ©
drapes
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2006-01-18 15:53:31]
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Re: My Demon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 04:32:39 PM AEST
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| I think everyone feels like this sometimes. great poem you really captured the feeling of personal demons quite well |
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Re: My Demon
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by Inevitable on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 04:44:30 PM AEST
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I felt like this once...things didn't turn out that well. Anyway i like it
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Re: My Demon
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by UKRaVeN on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 05:06:57 PM AEST
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| i can relate to that |
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Re: My Demon
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 05:52:32 PM AEST
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great piece! It's a great way to personify the demon
by seemingly talking to it like a person..
"You put a damper on my life, but as time goes on, I happen to depend on you."
very eery and alive
keep it up |
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Re: My Demon
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 06:43:45 PM AEST
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| Amen to this.. |
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Re: My Demon
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by Drapes on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 07:08:42 PM AEST
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"Wieghtless, but such a burden to drag around."
Oops, sry, spelling error. - Weightless
-Drapes |
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Re: My Demon
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by poetryfreak13 on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 10:14:36 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem, because it makes no sense, and alot of sense at the same time. :-D Great Poem. |
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